Wasted Time

Time is ticking.
Ever fast.
Watching, waiting till the last.
Ever ever speeding, never slow.
Once you're young and now your old.
Help me. Save me. From the fear.
Time is cruel and people dear.

9 comments:

  1. nice rhyming poem.
    i like it!

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  2. that is a really nice poem jillian

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  4. Ahhhh I love this! Beautiful work.

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  5. btw thanks for letting me know about that commercial!

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  6. You are a very skilled blogger and i mean that! You're thoughtful, intelligent, and humorous. A winning combination! I'm telling ya,it's like peanut butter and chocolate, or Pineapple smoothies and American Idol. It just can't be beat!

    You're blog, in my eyes, is one of the most beautiful. If it entered a beauty contest, it would so win, and it wouldn't even have to wear make up. That's how good it is.

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"Sometimes the world seems like a big hole. You spend all your life shouting down it and all you hear are echoes of some idiot yelling nonsense down a hole"
_Adam Duritz

I love hearing things that aren't my own pathetic echoes.